Omar's Biography
Omar was born on September 29,2002 in Brooklyn,New York. Omar always wanted to fly a kite, but the idea of flight baffled him at a young age. He wonder how a small piece of aircraft could handle so much force. At the age of eleven Omar now knows aircraft material must be very strong. The reason why he wants to mention to you about aircraft is because he wants you (and you can bring a few friends and when I mean a few I mean A LOT!) to my blog. He would appreciate it very much.
It is clear you really spent a lot of time revising this blog post. I am proud of you for that. Once again though, there is so much more I know about you that you haven't put here. Think of the reader. As a reader I want to know even MORE about you and I feel like you haven't given me enough information yet.
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