Jonathan's Theme
Hey do you want to know what our group theme is?? Our theme is taking us around the world from the olden days to the modern days. This theme involves traveling to new and exciting places. Our theme is......Nautica. Nautica means exploration and the study of the sea and many others.
The title Jonathon's theme seems like only he came up with the theme, also the explanation of your theme is short so you could go deeper into why you chose that theme.
ReplyDeleteI think you should add a little more detail or writting in this blog post because theyre are only a few sentences. You also shouldnt use two question marks in the end of a sentence because that seems unproffessional. I think you should say why your group chose that sepecific theme like for example if you chose a kite that had eggs or bunnies on it you chose it because easter is coming and you want your theme to match the holiday.
ReplyDeleteWhile reading this I thought this was really boring for a 5 sentence blog post. You should really get creative with your writing. I'm just giving you suggestions you don't have to use them.
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